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First shoot i did in a studio [at school].

Model: Leroy iFreaky :iconifreaky:

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:icontimothy-sim:
I had an overall 'not bad' feeling for this picture. But a few things need to be worked out i reckon.

While it wasn't exactly the most original piece, it certainly was good to capture detail and crisp sharpness on your model. I'll give you that.

The space you left on purpose was put to good use, showing how high your model jumped. That was good as well.

The questions that linger in my mind were 'Was the shirt untucked and flying on purpose?'
'Why iso 400 instead of 100?' 'Would 1/160 sec completely keep him motionless mid-jump?'

These are the little things you could ask yourself when you have the luxury of a full studio where the lights are ample and in excess.

Good try though! it's a nice piece
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:iconraine-angel:
This is a first shoot? Wow you're really applying your skills and education! good for you. The placement, framing, cropping, and lighting are fantastic. Youre subject looks like he had a blast. You captured his movement without any blur and the colours are all soft and complementary. I really love that his shadow is included all stretched an warped in the background. Ha ha that's so neat! The white border is a simple nice added touch. Overall the piece is really executed well. I can't say it's amazingly original but it's still an interesting take on a classic jumping shot. Well done. I look forward to your future works!
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:iconlinsinnetje:
Whoa, that's so cool!

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:iconskate-orama:
hahah heey, cool gedaan n__n nice job

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:iconciscotjuh:
Dankjewel ^^
Best leuk om te doen ook.

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:iconiris1999:
great shot!:D

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welcome:D

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very expressive model :thumbsup:

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June 9
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D300
10/1600 second
F/8.0
18 mm
400
Jun 9, 2009, 11:10:46 AM

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