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NIKON D300 10/1600 second F/8.0 18 mm 400 Jun 9, 2009, 11:10:46 AM Share
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Critiques
While it wasn't exactly the most original piece, it certainly was good to capture detail and crisp sharpness on your model. I'll give you that.
The space you left on purpose was put to good use, showing how high your model jumped. That was good as well.
The questions that linger in my mind were 'Was the shirt untucked and flying on purpose?'
'Why iso 400 instead of 100?' 'Would 1/160 sec completely keep him motionless mid-jump?'
These are the little things you could ask yourself when you have the luxury of a full studio where the lights are ample and in excess.
Good try though! it's a nice piece
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